Not really enough to call it part 2, but it does get to a good dividing point, I think ...

Part 1 if you need a refresher. Also, the whole of Chapter 1 has been reposted in alternia, the new community for alarin612's world of superheroes. New stories will be posted there as well as here.

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Without Time

Chapter1: Origins

PartOne – For Science!

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